Tuesday, 13 August 2013

My Ripper Rugby Poem

1 comment:

Mrs Manuyag said...

There are some interesting ideas in your Haiku poem Shantai. Thank you for your creativity with you presentation! Maybe next time you could check your syllables - I notice that a couple of your lines haven't followed the 5,7,5 pattern of Haiku poems :> Thank you for extending yourself by doing more than one verse!

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