Long
long ago there lived a little family. In this family there was Sophie, Chris and her mum . Sophie had nice shiny blond hair as shiny as a
sunflower. She could sing as beautiful as Christina Aguilera. There was
one bad man called Jack. He was as mean as a cheetah and a tiger mixed
together. He takes kids away quickly like a speeding car.
On
Friday Sophie was walking home from school then all of a sudden Jack
bumped into her and Sophie said ,” Watch where you're going,” Jack
turned in anger and said,”Nobody talks to me like that young lady!. He
chased after her. Sophie was horribly terrified and she ran for her
life. She stopped at her house. Sophie’s mother looked out the window
and saw that her daughter was being hit and was horribly hurt . Her
mother went outside straight away and tried to help poor Sophie.
Sophie was in pain she had to go to the doctors straight away.
Chris called the police and Jack was never seen again .From that day
on, Chris would pick Sophie up from school. Jack was never seen again by
Sophie. A few years later Sophie read in the paper that Jack had been
caught stealing a car. He was sent to prison and stayed there for the
rest of his life.
1 comment:
A very interesting narrative story Shantai! You are developing your ideas well by using interesting, descriptive language. Keep doing this and you will achieve your writing goals throughout the year.
Ms Aireen
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